Comments:Good use of emotive language
文章日期:2012年1月13日

Lawrence, you have adopted a sales-like tone in your essay promoting volunteer work as a way of releasing pressure and creating joy. You do this through emotive language which evokes feelings and images in your readers. Examples include "the joy from smiling faces" or "the laughter is like a breeze". By buying into the emotional response of your audience, you not only strengthen the appeal of volunteerism but also package it as a product that will render rewards.

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