Comments: Explore Your Senses
文章日期:2012年9月21日

Levana's and Nicole's adventures on the mainland and in Paris were surely fascinating and, while they have both included several adjectives ("we were very happy" or "I was very excited"), the experience would feel more real for readers if the writers went into a little more detail and each experience had its own paragraph. Here are some thoughts on how to do this:

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