Comments: Smart to make it personal
文章日期:2011年11月18日

Ivan, well done on writing a powerful and persuasive essay on the sacrifices economic gains often have on the environment. You localise your key concept in the first paragraph by noting China as an example of economic development with questionable environmental sustainability. By making the issue local, you personalise your argument and therefore encourage your readers to take your points seriously; this is not a problem happening to someone else on the other side of the world.

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