【明報專訊】Hiu Wa's piece is well-written in many ways. It has a beginning, a middle and an end. It has places and people, what they looked like and how they felt. There are facts and opinions. It is a little unimaginative, though. Plan before you write. If you write a few notes or bullet points on each part you want to write about, you might find you have little or nothing to say about some parts. Cut out those parts and write about something else.