【明報專訊】Natalie, you have expressed your feelings towards chocolate through an imaginative description of a scene. Here, the real world meets a fantasy world and you've created an environment that is both unbelievable as well as plausible. For example, your image of a boy with "caramel-coloured hair" paints a picture of an everyday child with brown hair but when you describe his body "made of brown chocolate", you make the readers question whether caramel is a colour or a material. The effect of creating real-world images only to place them in a fantasy world brings the readers closer to experiencing your feelings towards chocolate.