【明報專訊】Kwong Ying uses some very effective language to make this story scary to read. She has a long introduction which introduces the abandoned house and the reason she went there. In some types of writing, especially horror and fantasy stories, it is important to have a strong set-up because later parts will rely on the reader already having a good picture of the place and people in his or her mind. Take the time to establish the scenes and motivations of your stories.